Everything was amazing. The story line, voice acting, atmosphere, everything. The facial expressions need a bit of work, but this was just awesome!
Nice job for your first animation. I found the song went with the "scribbly lines" as you call them. If it wasn't for the music, I wouldn't have found this very interesting. Nice job and very nice choice of music. Keep it up!
Thanks, and understandable. I'm going to put some effort into making the visuals interesting next time. This was just sort of a test run.
Great first flash
This was a great movie considering it was your first flash. If you keep practicing, you'll be a good animator.
Animation was great. I loved it! Only mistake I found was that you spelled "were" wrong. You spelled it "where". Keep up the great work.
...I don't think anyone would want to look at, as you spell it, "opticle" illusions in a flash. Optical is the right way to spell it.
like i said to 3 or 2 other people it was late at night and i was tired... i will edit it soon.
... I could never do that when I made my first flash. Great but try to use less gradients. If you get more practice, you could make great flashes. Anyway nice flash!
Psssst! This is my like 100th flash! Just the only one I actually finished...
This was amazing! I've been waiting for this for a long time. It was worth the wait though, I was laughing my head off! Great collab!
...I can't believe I sat through that whole thing! It had no plot whatsoever, the art was crap and nothing was good!
1/10 for effort.
Well, it DID have a story... i hope the story is clear enough. Heck, it's even written on the page of my flash!
This is defiantly better than the first. Liked the choice of song too! Great job!
thanks, i thought the song matched
All I have to say is, good graphics, funny, godd storyline, but too short.
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